Sunday, September 4, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday 6


Welcome first time and repeat readers!  My sixth #sixsunday contribution is below, while the previous contributions are here: first, second, thirdfourth and fifth. To set up this YA Zombie apocalypse, the two individuals and dog are having their first meeting with some new people.


“What is that?”

Ouch, the dude just called me a ‘that’.

“That,” Cindy turned to look at me, “shit that’s just Erica.  Are you stupid?  Take off that hoodie and stop walking slow before they shoot you.”

I pulled the black hood off my face, temporarily blinded by the sunshine, “Sorry, just wanted to be cautious unlike the yapper there.”

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12 comments:

  1. *hehe* "Stop walking slow before they shoot you." Great dialogue.

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  2. Cautious and zombies are a given, right? I like Erica--she's smart. Great six!

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  3. "That" LOL. Oh this is funny! Love your six!

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  4. What a fun, snappy scene. Enjoyed this 6.

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  5. So, trying to play like she's a zombie so they'll eat her friend's brains instead?

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  6. Perfect pace, awesome snippet.

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  7. LMAO sounds like a fun read! Fab six

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  8. LOL, "That" has to be the funniest, especially her reaction to it.

    xoxoxo sis

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