Sunday, September 11, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday 7


Welcome first time and repeat readers!  My seventh #sixsunday offering is below, while the previous contributions are easily accessible by clicking here.  We previously met the MC, Erica, and the current traveling companions of Cindy and dog named Crystal.  Last week, they met up with the first group of other living people.



I just shook my head, “There are only eleven of you.  Is that it after three months?”
“Three more men are scouting ahead.  Add in the two of you we have sixteen.”
“And a dog,” I said.
He nodded before kneeling down, holding one hand to Crystal with the other on the rifle.  



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9 comments:

  1. Yup, don't forget the dog! Nice interactions, very natural :)

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  2. Oh, this flows really nicely. Great job!

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  3. Nice six! I love how natural the dialogue is.

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  4. An easy, natural flow. Thanks for sharing!

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  5. My first visit to your blog. I'm very intrigued by this snippet. I agree, very natural flow that draws me in.

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  6. Also my first time here. My own six sentence Sunday #2. It definately made me want to find out what has happened and what is yet to come. Good job.

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  7. Oh, I very much like the one hand out the the dog, the other on the rifle... gives you a great peak into his head :)

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  8. I agree with the others. Your dialogue has always been very natural. Must be from the voices in your head ;) XOXOX sis

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