Sunday, September 18, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday 8


Welcome first timer and repeaters!  My eight #sixsunday offering is below, while the previous contributions are easily accessible by clicking here.  We previously met the MC, Erica, and the current traveling companions of Cindy and dog named Crystal.  Last week, they met up with the first group of other living people, finding they were just fourteen people in their group.  They are cautious seeing a dog with Erica, though happy to find the pooch would eat real food and not flesh.


He nodded before kneeling down, holding one hand to Crystal with the other on the rifle.  Cindy began to blab about how much of a downer I was to the moral.  I do not know what she thought.  Shit, I am not sure what I was thinking would happen.  Would we find a group and magically find that all-powerful place that is zombie free up north?  I wish this were a movie with a guaranteed happy-ending.



I know there is no dialogue in this one, but I wanted to finish this section of the book.  I've been breaking from writing and keeping my mind off the zombies before going into mad woman editing mode.  My mind has been kicking me for not writing.  It has forced me to rethink my first completed book and how to rewrite it in a new and exciting way.  Soon I shall reach the breaking point of "omg I haven't opened Word in...um...can't remember when" and will bust a move to write again :D.  

7 comments:

  1. I kn0w that feeling, fantastic six.

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  2. Oh, I like this. Now I want to read more. Great six.

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  3. Yeah. You can't go wrong when you have to defeat the zombies.

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  4. Interesting six and can't wait to read more

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  5. ...I am not sure what your second sentence means... moral? Am I just really overtired, or is that a mistake?

    ...I remember saying last week I like how he has a hand out to the dog and one on the rifle ;) nice way to show his state of mind

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  6. Nice six...and yes I am just now getting to read it. Just like you I cannot tell you the last time I opened word and wrote anything. Here's to getting out of the slump soon! XOXOX Sis

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